更新時(shí)間：2021-06-12 05:17:32作者：admin2
2019年2月14日
雅思大作文題目
新技術(shù)改變了孩子們的玩耍方式，
這是好還是壞？
New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
解析&審題
本題中有三個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞，即new technologies,children,spend their free time，要求討論“新技術(shù)改變了孩子們玩耍的方式，這是好還是壞？”在構(gòu)思本題的時(shí)候，我們首先需要說清楚的是：哪些新技術(shù)？怎么樣改變了孩子們玩耍的方式？然后討論這種改變是好還是壞。當(dāng)然，我們也要提醒自己，本題的重點(diǎn)是討論“這種改變是好還是壞？”
說到“新技術(shù)”，我們立馬會(huì)想到電腦，網(wǎng)絡(luò)，智能手機(jī)。雅思考試寫作經(jīng)常要求考生討論這樣的題目“有了新技術(shù)，人們是否還需要去博物館，去上學(xué)，去圖書館，去公司上班”，這是要求考生討論新技術(shù)給人們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的影響。本題其實(shí)與這些題目是異曲同工的：有了新技術(shù)，孩子們?cè)趺赐嫠＃?br>那么，新技術(shù)如何改變孩子們玩耍的方式呢？我們需要提煉出2-3個(gè)“玩耍新方式”，在接下來重點(diǎn)討論起優(yōu)劣勢(shì)的時(shí)候才能有基礎(chǔ)。這里其實(shí)涉及到一個(gè)比較的問題。沒有新技術(shù)的時(shí)候，孩子們一般喜歡在一起做各種游戲，或者安靜地閱讀，而網(wǎng)絡(luò)手機(jī)的廣泛使用，則讓孩子們整天獨(dú)自打電子游戲，或者瀏覽各種社交媒體信息。于是，我們可以歸納出新技術(shù)給孩子玩耍方式造成的兩個(gè)影響：（1）從真實(shí)的集體游戲轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)樘摂M的網(wǎng)上游戲；（2）從閱讀書籍到緊盯手機(jī)或電腦。
這樣，我們接下來的討論就相對(duì)容易了。我們可以討論這種變化的消極影響：首先，緊盯手機(jī)和電腦會(huì)給孩子的身體帶來不良影響（數(shù)據(jù)表明，中小學(xué)生近視的比例已經(jīng)達(dá)到驚人的70%），其次，過多沉浸在虛擬世界容易讓孩子們產(chǎn)生孤獨(dú)感，失去解決真實(shí)世界中各種問題的能力（比如人際交往能力，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)能力等）。
這樣寫，大家是否覺得思路是很清晰的？接下來，請(qǐng)大家閱讀唐老師的高分范文，看以上思路是如何具體反映到字里行間的。
老師筆記
01
The widespread use of new technologies such as the Internet,computers,and smart phones has fundamentally changed the way children spend their free time.In the past,most children wouldengage in outdoor activities such as hiking,playing hide-and-seek,flying kites,to name only a few.Those who enjoyed reading for pleasure would stay indoors and read print books such as classical novels,children’s stories,and comic books.The situation is quite different now.The great majority of children today spend their spare time online,playing video games,listening to music,and browsing around in the social media of all kinds.In my view,this new development has more downside risks.
互聯(lián)網(wǎng)、電腦和智能手機(jī)等新技術(shù)的廣泛應(yīng)用，從根本上改變了兒童利用空閑時(shí)間的方式。在過去，大多數(shù)兒童都會(huì)從事戶外活動(dòng)，如遠(yuǎn)足，玩捉迷藏，放風(fēng)箏，等等。那些喜歡讀書的人會(huì)待在家里，讀一些印刷書籍，如經(jīng)典小說，兒童故事和漫畫書。現(xiàn)在情況完全不同了。今天，絕大多數(shù)孩子都把業(yè)余時(shí)間花在網(wǎng)上，玩電子游戲，聽音樂，在各種社交媒體上閑逛。在我看來，這一新趨勢(shì)有更多不利的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。
解析
（1）本段討論新技術(shù)如何改變了兒童利用空閑時(shí)間的方式。本段采用的是比較法：過去......，而現(xiàn)在......。
（2）widespread廣泛的
（3）fundamentally從根本上地
（4）engage in從事
（5）to name only a few僅舉幾個(gè)例子；諸如此類；等等
（6）the great majority of...絕大多數(shù)的......
（7）browse around四處閑看
（8）downside risks不利的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)
02
Though it does make children’s life more interesting,and help them obtain information in a faster and more convenient way,the Internet also makes children easily addicted to it.The violent gun-fighting games,for example,appeal to children so much that some of them will spend hours and hours playing them.The cost is really high.The children’s performance at school becomes worse and worse,and their health also suffers.A recent study indicates that globally,the Internet games are responsible for 70%middle school students who are shortsighted.
雖然互聯(lián)網(wǎng)確實(shí)使兒童的生活更有趣，并幫助他們以更快和更方便的方式獲取信息，但互聯(lián)網(wǎng)也使孩子們很容易對(duì)它上癮。比如暴力槍戰(zhàn)游戲?qū)⒆觽冇泻艽蟮奈Γ灾劣谒麄冎械囊恍┤藭?huì)幾個(gè)小時(shí)幾個(gè)小時(shí)地玩這些游戲。這樣做的成本真的很高。孩子們?cè)趯W(xué)校的表現(xiàn)越來越差，而且健康也受到損害。最近的一項(xiàng)研究表明，在全球范圍內(nèi)，網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲造成70%的中學(xué)生近視。
解析
（1）本段論述把時(shí)間花在網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲上的第一種壞處：學(xué)習(xí)和身體受損。論述方法包括舉例和引用研究數(shù)據(jù)。
（2）be addicted to...沉迷于......
（3）appeal to...吸引
（4）globally全球范圍內(nèi)
（5）be responsible for...為......負(fù)責(zé)；導(dǎo)致......
03
Worse still,too much time spent facing the computer or smart phone may result in children’s isolation from the actual world.In the traditional games,children could learn the skills to work with others,lead a team,and create new things.All these skills are helpful for children to maintain their interpersonal relations when they grow up.But children can never develop these important skills by hiding behind the virtual Internet world without interactions with real people.
更糟糕的是，花太多時(shí)間面對(duì)電腦或智能手機(jī)可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致孩子們與現(xiàn)實(shí)世界隔絕。在傳統(tǒng)的游戲中，孩子們可以學(xué)習(xí)各種技能：與他人合作，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)團(tuán)隊(duì)，創(chuàng)造新事物。所有這些技能都有助于孩子長(zhǎng)大后維持人際關(guān)系。但是如果躲在虛擬的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)世界后面，不與真實(shí)的人互動(dòng)，孩子們永遠(yuǎn)也不能培養(yǎng)這些重要的技能。
解析
（1）本段從更深的層面討論花太多時(shí)間在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上的壞處：導(dǎo)致隔絕，無法培養(yǎng)人際交往能力。
（2）result in...導(dǎo)致
（3）isolation隔絕；疏離
（4）interpersonal relations人際關(guān)系
（5）virtual虛擬的
04
To conclude,new technologies have changed the way children spend their free time from outdoor activities to passive indoor Internet surfing.This may be beneficial to a certain extent,but generally it isa change for the worse.
總之，新技術(shù)已經(jīng)改變了孩子們利用空閑時(shí)間的方式，從戶外活動(dòng)轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)楸粍?dòng)的室內(nèi)網(wǎng)絡(luò)沖浪。這可能在一定程度上是有益的，但是總體上看，這個(gè)變化是更糟了。
解析
（1）本段是結(jié)論，明確提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。
（2）passive被動(dòng)的
（3）to a certain extent在某種程度上
（4）a change for the worse一個(gè)糟糕的變化
7分范文
The widespread use of new technologies such as the Internet,computers,and smart phones has fundamentally changed the way children spend their free time.In the past,most children would engage in outdoor activities such as hiking,playing hide-and-seek,flying kites,to name only a few.Those who enjoyed reading for pleasure would stay indoors and read print books such as classical novels,children’s stories,and comic books.The situation is quite different now.The great majority of children today spend their spare time online,playing video games,listening to music,and browsing around in the social media of all kinds.In my view,this new development has more downside risks.
Though it does make children’s life more interesting,and help them obtain information in a faster and more convenient way,the Internet also makes children easily addicted to it.The violent gun-fighting games,for example,appeal to children so much that some of them will spend hours and hours playing them.The cost is really high.The children’s performance at school becomes worse and worse,and their health also suffers.A recent study indicates that globally,the Internet games are responsible for 70%middle school students who are shortsighted.
Worse still,too much time spent facing the computer or smart phone may result in children’s isolation from the actual world.In the traditional games,children could learn the skills to work with others,lead a team,and create new things.All these skills are helpful for children to maintain their interpersonal relations when they grow up.But children can never develop these important skills by hiding behind the virtual Internet world without interactions with real people.
To conclude,new technologies have changed the way children spend their free time from outdoor activities to passive indoor Internet surfing.This may be beneficial to a certain extent,but generally it is a change for the worse.
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建議背誦的句子
1.The widespread use of new technologies such as the Internet,computers,and smart phones has fundamentally changed the way children spend their free time.
互聯(lián)網(wǎng)、電腦和智能手機(jī)等新技術(shù)的廣泛應(yīng)用，從根本上改變了兒童利用空閑時(shí)間的方式。
2.The great majority of children today spend their spare time online,playing video games,listening to music,and browsing around in the social media of all kinds.
今天，絕大多數(shù)孩子都把業(yè)余時(shí)間花在網(wǎng)上，玩電子游戲，聽音樂，在各種社交媒體上閑逛。
3.Though it does make children’s life more interesting,and help them obtain information in a faster and more convenient way,the Internet also makes children easily addicted to it.
雖然互聯(lián)網(wǎng)確實(shí)使兒童的生活更有趣，并幫助他們以更快和更方便的方式獲取信息，但互聯(lián)網(wǎng)也使孩子們很容易對(duì)它上癮。
4.A recent study indicates that globally,the Internet games are responsible for 70%middle school students who are shortsighted.
最近的一項(xiàng)研究表明，在全球范圍內(nèi)，網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲造成70%的中學(xué)生近視。
5.Children can never develop these important skills by hiding behind the virtual Internet world without interactions with real people.
如果躲在虛擬的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)世界后面，不與真實(shí)的人互動(dòng)，孩子們永遠(yuǎn)也不能培養(yǎng)這些重要的技能。